Magdor of Valaduum



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Magdor

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CHARACTER NAME PLAYER ALIGNMENT DEITY
Fighter4 6000 Dwarf M 4' 1 inches 171 pounds
CLASS EXPERIENCE RACE SIZE HEIGHT WEIGHT
4 10000 53 M Coal Black Earth Brown
LEVEL NEXT LEVEL AGE GENDER EYES HAIR
ABILITY
NAME
ABILITY
SCORE
ABILITY
MODIFIER
TEMPORARY
SCORE
TEMPORARY
MODIFIER
Str
Strength
18 +4

Dex
Dexterity
17 +3

Con
Constitution
18 +4

Int
Intelligence
15 +2

Wis
Wisdom
7 -2

Cha
Charisma
5 -3

TOTAL
WOUNDS/CURRENT HP

SUBDUAL DAMAGE

DAMAGE
REDUCTION

SPEED
HP
Hit Points
43






20'
AC
Armour Class
17 = 10 + +4 + +3 + 0 +
+

10 0
TOTAL ARMOR
BONUS
STAT
BONUS
SIZE
BONUS
NATURAL
ARMOR
MISC
BONUS
MISS
CHANCE
ARCANE
FAILURE
ARMOR
CHECK
SPELL
RESIST.
INITIATIVE
Modifier
+5 = +3 +
TOTAL DEX
MODIFIER
MISC
MODIFIER
BASE ATTACK
Bonus
+4
SKILLS
SKILL NAME SKILL
MODIFIER
ABILITY
MODIFIER
RANKS MISC
MODIFIER
Appraise 2 = 2 + 0.0 +
Balance 3 = 3 + 0.0 +
Bluff -4 = -4 + 0.0 +
Climb 8 = 4 + 4.0 +
Concentration 4 = 4 + 0.0 +
Diplomacy -4 = -4 + 0.0 +
Escape Artist 3 = 3 + 0.0 +
Gather Information -4 = -4 + 0.0 +
Heal -2 = -2 + 0.0 +
Hide 3 = 3 + 0.0 +
Intimidate -4 = -4 + 0.0 +
Jump 4 = 4 + 0.0 +
Listen -2 = -2 + 0.0 +
Move Silently 3 = 3 + 0.0 +
Ride 6 = 3 + 3.0 +
Search 2 = 2 + 0.0 +
Sense Motive -2 = -2 + 0.0 +
Spot 0 = 0 + 0.0 +
Swim 4 = 4 + 0.0 +
Use Rope 3 = 3 + 0.0 +
Wilderness Lore -2 = -2 + 0.0 +
Craft(Weaponsmith) 9 = 2 + 7.0 +
Knowledge(War) 7 = 2 + 5.0 +
Craft(Blacksmithing) 9 = 2 + 7.0 +
SAVING THROWS TOTAL BASE
SAVE
ABILITY
MODIFIER
MAGIC
MODIFIER
MISC
MODIFIER
TEMPORARY
MODIFIER
CONDITIONAL
MODIFIERS
Fortitude
Constitution
+8 = +4 + +4 +
+
+
Reflex
Dexterity
+4 = +1 + +3 +
+
+
Will
Wisdom
-1 = +1 + -2 +
+
+
TOTAL BASE ATTACK BONUS STR
MODIFIER
SIZE
MODIFIER
MISC
MODIFIER
TEMPORARY
MODIFIER
MELEE
ATTACK BONUS
+8 = +4
+ +4 +
+
+
RANGED
ATTACK BONUS
+7 = +4
+ +3 +
+
+
TOTAL BASE ATTACK BONUS DEX
MODIFIER
SIZE
MODIFIER
MISC
MODIFIER
TEMPORARY
MODIFIER
UNARMED TOTAL ATTACK BONUS DAMAGE CRITICAL
+8 1d3+4 20/x2
Greataxe, Masterwork TOTAL ATTACK BONUS DAMAGE CRITICAL
+10 1d12+6 20/3
RANGE TYPE SIZE SPECIAL PROPERTIES
0' S L  
Sword (short) TOTAL ATTACK BONUS DAMAGE CRITICAL
+8 1d6+4 19-20/2
RANGE TYPE SIZE SPECIAL PROPERTIES
0' P S  
Dagger TOTAL ATTACK BONUS DAMAGE CRITICAL
+8 1d4+4 19-20/2
RANGE TYPE SIZE SPECIAL PROPERTIES
0' P T  
 
*Chain shirt, Mithral TYPE ARMOR BONUS MAX DEX BONUS
  +4 +6
CHECK PENALTY SPELL FAILURE SPECIAL PROPERTIES
0 10  

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LANGUAGES
Common, Dwarven, Orc
SPECIAL ABILITIES
Dark,Stonecunning,save +2 vs. poison,save +2 vs spells,+4 dodge vs giants,+2 on Appraise of stone/metal items,+2 on stone/metal Craft check
FEATS
NAME DESCRIPTION
Foe Hunter (Orcs) Your homeland dictates the type of foe you have trained against. When fighting monsters of that race, you gain a +1 competence bonus to damage rolls with melee attacks and ranged weapons at ranges of up to 30 feet, and you act as if you had the Improved Critical feat for the weapon you are using. This does not stack with the Improved Critical feat. Special: In Cormyr, Damara, Tethyr, Vaasa, or as a Shield Dwarf, your traditional foes are goblinoids-goblins, hobgoblins, and bugbears. In Chult and Tashalar, this feat applies to lizardfolk and yuan-ti. Wood elves train against gnolls. In the Lake of Steam, the North, and the Moonsea, this feat applies to orcs and half-orcs. You may take this feat multiple times. Its effects do not stack. Each time you take the feat you must qualify for learning regional feats in a land that hunts a different creature than that specified by the regional feat you already have.
Weapon Focus (Greataxe) With a specific weapon you're proficient in, you add +1 to attack rolls.
Power Attack On your action before making an attack, subtract up to your base attack bonus from attack rolls and add that value to your damage rolls.
Blooded You get a +2 bonus to Initiative and a +2 bonus to all Spot checks.
Weapon Specialization (Greataxe) See page 37 of PHB. Specialize with Weapon Focus weapons only.

Magdor

Dwarf
RACE
53
AGE
4' 1 inches
HEIGHT
171 pounds
WEIGHT
Coal Black
EYE COLOR
SKIN COLOR
Earth Brown
HAIR COLOR
HAIR LENGTH
PHOBIAS
PERSONALITY TRAITS
INTERESTS

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Biography

In the year 536 CY I was born to a miner and his wife.  My mother and the other females in the clan named me Farnar, which means big brave.  My mother often told me that I never cried or made a peep when I was born and she thought I was so brave.  My mother was a shopkeeper and my father a miner.  My father worked at various mining settlements and enjoyed his work.  My mother worked for one of the dry goods stores and she would go to the mining settlement on paydays and sell to the miners.  They were a well-liked couple and enjoyed their lives.  My father liked to drink and he would always have a few aurauns and start talking about his days as a fighter, he often told many stories about how he had saved the lives of several of his friends when he was younger.  He was injured in battle once, (even though “he was hit from twice sides by the nasty slimy Orcs, I laid em down by the ax hand of Moradin”. and “I took em gold and I took em ears”  “Then I took em som more.” ( if I had a gold for every time I sat upon my father’s knee and heard this story.))  and the local healer told him that he could no longer fight in the wars because his legs just would not carry him all day.  He was taught to count by Khunnur the merchant in Dragonhome. and then my father taught me.  He  was put in charge of a group of the miners.  He was a good miner and he loved doing it.  He would count and identify metals,  they say he had a nose for copper, he said he had a nose for gold.  He would organize the carts and donkeys and make sure that the right carts were in the right place when the clan needed him. That they all agreed the thing my father did very well.  When something need be counted and placed in the right spaces my father would be called upon .  

One morning I went into the room for breakfast and as I sat down my father looked at me.  As he was about to say good morning his eyes got wide and he told my mother to come over and look.  As I sat there looking lost and wondering what the heck they were looking at.  I asked, what?  My mother touched my face and it felt strange.  I put my hand up to my face and I had grown hair on my face.  Yea!!

560 CY

My father took me to meet a couple of friends of his one-day, after my beard had grown in a little, and I was introduced to two men the first was Captain Falco the second Rondald Tarran.  Captain Falco had once been Sgt. Falco.  He and my father had fought together and I was to learn later that night after several kegs of auraun that all three of them had grown up together and fought in many battles together.  They promised to take care of each others families and to make sure the clan had all of the things it needed they wanted me to do two things.  First I would train as a solider.  Capt. Falco told me that I would train as a fighter and a guard and I would be needed to help keep the mines free of vermin and intruders.  Rondald told me that he was not married and he did not think he would ever take another wife since an Orc killed his while she was with child.  So he needed someone to train to run the forge someday.  I was very excited my childhood dreams of fighting with a sword or ax were about to come true.

 Several days later my father and mother had a large feast and my father named me Grumtor.  It meant steel soul.  He was very proud of me, as I was he.

I traveled to Dragonhome where my training began.  I had traveled before with my parents, I was amazed at the site of Dragonhome.  It was an incredible sight to see.  It got its name because? That’s right it used to be a dragons home.

I was squared away at the barracks and I was given a new uniform, the cloak my mother had given me before I came was the same color.  I looked pretty good in my uniform.  I was taken to the forge and showed around.  My first job there was to come early every morning and light the forge.  The fire never goes out but I was to come every morning and stoke the fire.  It was a big responsibility for an untrained dwarf.  Rondald told me that because I was the son of his friend he would treat me, as I was a son of his.

As the years went by I trained with the soldiers and at the forge, the work was hard but I always did what I was told to do.  Every morning I was at the forge, I would build the wood and coal back until the fire was hot and the coals would be lit.  Then I would go to the barracks and help square things away there and be in uniform when it was time to report for training drills.

I was good with several of the weapons but my favorite was a great big ax called a greatax.  It was large and had a blade on each side.  It was a very heavy weapon and I was not very good with it.  I practiced everyday with the big thing working and training trying to hit the tree trunks that had been placed for us to strike.  I was told by some of the other dwarfs that I should make my arms bigger by lifting heavy things.  I would go to the forge and when I had finished cleaning up everyday I would try to lift the anvil off of its perch.  I would pick up everything I could find that was heavy.  Soon I was getting much better at swinging that ax.

The years rolled by and I studied the art of war and the dwarves battle techniques.  I learned about all of the weapons that we could make and use for war.  We did not want war but, if its war you want, it is war you will get.  I learned much in the forge as well.  I learned how to tell the difference in metals and what was good for a sword and what type was good for an ax.  I knew the difference in metal for tools and metal for weapons.  I was truly learning a valuable skill.  I spent my first time at the forge making a hoe.  I made a lot of hoes.  I then made shovels, lots of shovels.  I was getting good at making the tools the clan needed.  I took my time and made a good product.  I moved quickly up the ladder and soon I was making daggers and other weapons.  I soon began to make short swords and long swords.  I learned how to make wheels and gears, tools that were used in the mines.  I had started to make armor but there was not a big demand for armor and Rondald was not the greatest armor maker.  He would always say, “A dwarf that needs a shovel and a pick will live longer than a dwarf that needs armor and a sword”.  We worked all the time and I was enjoying myself.

One day Rondald Had come across some metal that was very special and he told me to take it home and hide it in his house so no one would find out about it.  He never said too much about it again, for a long time.  I heard him say something once about the metal bars to my father.  He told my father that a gnome had enhanced the metal but my father the skeptic told him naaa it’s not magic and if it is you better destroy it.  Rondald once was working on a piece of the metal, he said it looked like a fine steel and would make a great ax for someone one day.  I asked if I could have some of the metal and he just laughed at me and his eyes would twinkle and he would laugh some more. 

I was by this time moving around to different mining settlements and doing guard duty.  It was pretty boring but I would always hope there would be trouble and I would get to engage in battle.  There had been a few minor battles with the occasional rabbit or boar but nothing that was exciting. 

One day we were all ordered to a small mining settlement not far from Dragonhome and I volunteered.  It was not a far walk and I had been there several times before doing guard duty.  It was the same camp my mother and father lived and worked in.  I was always happy to go home.  I met my mother and father and had dinner with them that evening and we all sat around and they listened as I told stories of other camps, and other places I had seen recently.  My mother and father never had any more children so I always felt special.  After dinner that night I went and took my spot for guard duty.  It was an uneventful night.  The next several nights were uneventful.  Then I started my dayshift rotation.  Things were more active and I would get to see more of the clan during the day.  There was a young dwarf that I had met that was fascinated by the clan guard.  His name was Aust but everyone called him Bar. He had a twin and I often confused the two, until they spoke. Then one day I saw that the twin of  Bar, Kord, had what looked like a little piece of wood stuck in his mouth.  From that day on I could tell Kord form Bar He was a little younger than me but not by much.  He was a little strange but I liked him.  We would talk and hang out, his dad was teaching him about stonecutting, and I think he was pretty good.  My days there were good, I liked being in the guard and I liked guarding my clan.

 Then one-day things went bad wrong.

I was on post outside of the stonecutters shop. I think it had something to do with a stone my father told me about in the mine.  He had heard the cries about the “Gods Tear” from deep in the mine.  It was a perfect blue diamond, flawless from every angle.  Many of the dwarves said they had never seen one quite so lovely.  The town gem cutter was Bar’s and Kord’s father.  It was his shop I was guarding.  There were 4 guards at this hut all the time day and night.  I was friends with them and I liked em all pretty good.  They were mostly from Dragonhome and I guess they liked guard duty in their hometown as much as I did.   The one I was with mostly, Bernum, was a good dwarf.  He was looking forward to getting married, his father had arranged a good wife for him.  He was looking forward to being promoted after our apprenticeship was over.  He was planning to live with his folks when he was in town.  His wife would stay there as well while he was out of town.  I had dinner at his place once after a hard days fighting.  His father, Prellis Hardtack was a fighter and teacher at the clan guard.  He was the best rider I had ever seen.  He could ride and fight and use different weapons, he was a very talented dwarf.  His father told us the stories of my father and what a good fighter he had been.  He also told me that my father was very proud of me and was boasting to all of the clan about how I can fight and swing a hammer on iron.  I had enjoyed my dinner that night.  While on guard duty that night, my life changed forever.

  So the night shift was late, this never happened and we were all getting a little concerned, Bernum was looking forward to telling on the underclassmen for being late.  Then as if the gates from hell had opened, we were under attack.  Orcs surrounded us, they came from everywhere, and they came hard and fast.  They lay dwarves to rest everywhere.  The smell and the heat coming from their bodies is something I will never forget.  They were strong and I was hit from behind as I was removing the head of one of em.  I woke up several days later and was in shock for a long time after that.  The details as I got them later are not as important as the fact that I had not done my job.    I found my mother and father later in the day.  They had been laid out for mourning.  The Orcs had killed em all.  All except 5, two passed over later.

I had been hit in the back of the head and Bernum killed the one that hit me and then he was killed by 4 more of the bastards.  They had come from somewhere and laid out all of the guards and then captured Bar’s father.  He finally told the smelly beast where he had hidden the diamond. And being that they are Orcs they killed him as soon as the got what they came for.

It was the worst thing I had ever seen, the Orcs had tossed all of the dwarves right off of the ledge of a pit.  The stack of bodies at the bottom of the hill was sickening.  I had been taken back to Dragonhome so that a healer could look after me but I went back as soon as I could.  There was a lot of work to do back there.  It was hard but I knew the right thing to do was put them all to rest so they could all serve Moradin in the next life.

About the time I finished my apprenticeship at Rondalds there was a story about ‘Gods Tear” being not faraway at an Orc camp.  I volunteered to go and I guess since they knew I wanted my revenge on those smelly bastards.  The raid was led by Bar’s uncle Dulin.  Dulin was a good strong warrior.   I was proud to serve under him.  He had made sure Bar was in the clan guard. Bar was a good warrior but not a very typical warrior.  He was how would you say it?  Different.  I went out on the raid and we were kicking some major Orc butt.  I was swinging my great ax and we were killing all of the orcs that we could see.  Then like at the stonecutters shop the gates of hell were opened and the smelly nasty bastards were upon us.  They came from everywhere, I heard someone yell ambush and I heard a few other things before I went down.  

When I woke up this time I was buried under a pile of nasty orc bodies.  The first thing I remembered was the thing that I had heard during the battle.  I could not shake the sound of the big mean ugly orc and what he said.  I looked around a made a bandage from some of the material on a corpse.  I searched around the bodies looking for our leaders.  I do not know how long I was their or what all I did while I was there.  I had found Dulin’s ax.  I had strapped the ax to my back and our clan guard flag tied to a staff I had found.  I tried to find other items for the clan member’s back home, things I thought the families would like to have, but the Orc slime was on everything.  I cleaned as much of it off me as I could and then I do not know what happened but I had to get it all off me and off me now.  After all of these years I cannot stand to be touched by or close to an Orc, much less have that damn slime on me or my stuff.  As I stumbled out of the mess of tangled bodies I tried to keep going but I was hurt badly.  I walked a little farther and I thought I saw riders approaching; thank god it was a rescue party.  I saw our clan guard flag and then I collapsed. 

After I healed a few days I went and saw Dulin’s family.  I told Bar, Kord, and Gaeg’s older brother, a world-class blacksmith about what happened at the Orc camp.  I told them all of the things I heard and saw.  I returned the ax and Gaeg’s brother was very happy to have it back even thought there was no word from his father in weeks.  He gave to me for returning his families ax a mitheral chain mail shirt he had been working on.  The quality was outstanding; I still wear it to this day. 

Life returned to kind of normal after that, I returned to the forge and took out my frustrations there.  I felt that I had let my clan down twice now.  I took a hell of a beating and I gave as good as I got, but I did not save the clan or Dulin.  I had reached the end of my apprenticeship at the forge and Rondald gave me several bars of the metal that he said was magic.  I do not know if they are or not but the steel was quality.  Rondald told me that now that I was a journeyman I got to name myself.  I thought about this for several days and decided on.  Magdor Grumtor.  I decided to keep the name my father gave me as a hearth name since I no longer had a family other than Rondald and Capt. Falco.  The two of them threw a party to announce my Rite of Leaving The Hall.  There was gost, and klar, and auraun.  Even thought the feast was a joyful time I was lost and felt that I would have been a disappointment to my father.

I worked the bars over and over.  I would heat and fold the metal and then heat and fold it again.  I do not remember how many times I heated and folded the metal but I let it flow just like Rondald had taught me.  I let the metal make it own shape and I just provided the fire and the hammer.  When I was done I had made three of the finest great axes I had ever held.  I attached them to the finest wood handles I could have made.  They cost me a top quality set of knives for the wood shaper but I thought it was well worth it.  I gave one of the axes to Bar and I gave the other to Kord.  I felt bad that I had been on duty when their father had been taken.  I felt as if it were my fault that their father had been killed.  They assured me that it was not my fault but the three of us forged a bond on that day.  I told them about my father and his bond with his buddies and the three of us decided to do the same thing.  We swore to look out after each other and each other’s families. 

I caught up with Bar one day in a small village.  He was riding guard with a convoy and he was headed to Dyvers.  He had heard his cousin Gaeg mentioned in a bards song at an inn.  He said he was going to go and look for him, heard he may be with the Blades of Light in Dyvers.  So I decided to join him.  Bar was a little different now it may have been all of the gutshaker or something deeper that changed him.  He was still a good strong dwarf, but some times I feel like I am talking to someone different while I am looking at him.  Bar and I are here in Dyvers and I thought it would be good to take some time and get this story scribed.  So that brings me to here and now. 

I am not sure what is next or where I will be tomorrow but I know this:  I do not want a fight, but if a fights what you want, it’s a fight your gonna get. And if you know of any Orcs any where around let me know, Ill take em gold and ill take em ears, and then ill take em some more.

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